Wednesday, 26 October 2016

Rapunzel and the giant peach

   
This week we had to make up a story based on any fictional or real character i decided to go with Cinderella as the sister mother gothel as the mum Rapunzel the main character and the characters from James and the giant peach. The title came from Rapunzel and James and the giant peach so i clashed them together and i came up with Rapunzel and the giant peach.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Paris,This story literally blew me away.I was not expecting that ending. I thought it was great. Maybe next time you could check your spelling though.I thought it was fantastic.

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  2. Hi Paris
    I'm Faith from Blaketown school
    Your story was... interesting
    I was not expecting what happened on page 3 & 4 it was very funny
    maybe net time you could make it a little less gruesome
    Byeeeeee
    From Faith

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